Amazing,,it was laced wth emotions in every line.

This ... I don't know ... I liked the concept ... But something seemed off. I'm not sure what, though ... Whatever. It's still good.

wow. o.o
i liked the description and the pace of the story. It wasn't rushed, and it didn't go slow either.

also liked how you ended with those same words "warm, calm...comfortable"

Wow. This was amazing. I feel connected to the speaker. I too was once hurt, and found someone who made my bleeding stop.

I had never felt such comfort in my life.