Ooh. This was good. Nice use of "hieroglyphs". This sounds like a fun exercise. =D

I'm shocked something I wrote was intruiging enough to be the base for someone else's work, so thanks I appreciate that. And I agree with the person before me the imagery is pretty awesome in this poem.

Beautiful and intense imagry. I loved the lines, "Lighting cracking Tracing brilliant hieroglyphs Across the blackened sky." This is wonderfully well written. Definatley keep writing.