This poem describes how often society ruins children

Hmm. Good. Depressing ... But history usually is. But sometimes it's not. Like, classical India is teh shiznit. Very laissez-faire. Good stuff. Anyway, I liked it. Especially the last three lines.

I really like this. Brutal honesty, eh?

I like the way it's done. Its fast to read, approachable, and easy to understand what you're gatting at. Odd I'd say it (I've never written a single happy ending before, and my happy endings are usually a little depressing) but it seems like you only highlighted what's bad about the world and history though.

This is very well written. I love how you not only mentioned the history of the world, but added some of your own personal history to this. I like it a lot. Keep writing.

Wow, dark and bold - nice. I might see the world QUITE as harsh as you, but I do believe there is some truth in what you see. There's too much bad going on the world.