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| LadyRoger 2008-03-27 ch 1,  | abuseI have to agree. It's fantastic. I love "shiverthin" and "lungs grow weak" especially. The whole thing has a great mood. |
| the wilderness remains 2006-12-01 ch 1, | abuseamazing use of words and imagery. you conveyed such a sense of loneliness and longing that it gave me chills... i especially love "And morning gropes the shadowed house with moans"- you described things in a way that i would never have thought of describing that way, yet i could still picture it perfectly. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2006-10-26 ch 1, | abuseWonderful. |
| the-foresight 2006-10-19 ch 1, | abuseTha was amazing, your use of language was just exquisite. Perfect in fact, it was fantastic. |