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| slightlyaddictedx3 2007-06-02 ch 1, | abuseit seems like u got a good plot. i like it so far. i hp=ope u continue. i think the story is aobut amber. u said she was the one. isnt she the **? update soon please and thank u. |
| under the influence 2006-10-19 ch 1, | abuseinteresting...could it be...Gen...maybe Amber...maybe Dee? |
| incandescente 2006-10-19 ch 1, | abusethis is very interesting! a brand new twist to the cliche stories around.. :) continue writing! i wonder if the persona's amber.. heh. |
| yourroyalqueenrandom 2006-10-19 ch 1, | abuseLol. I like it. It shows promise. Update soon. :) |
| bookface31 2006-10-19 ch 1, | abuseThat's awesome, because I didn't expect that the narrator was one of them; she sounds like she hates them, except for when she says that the girls are good friends. Can I make a prediction...? I think the narrator is Amber, but that's just me. If I'm wrong, I owe you one. This is a very interesting story, and has a lot of potential. I can't wait to see what you do with it!! Keep writing, please! --bOOkface31-- |
| darlingnicotine 2006-10-19 ch 1, | abuseC: love it! |