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Reviews For: Jefferson Hill's Royalty

slightlyaddictedx3
2007-06-02
ch 1,
abuseit seems like u got a good plot. i like it so far. i hp=ope u continue. i think the story is aobut amber. u said she was the one. isnt she the **? update soon please and thank u.
under the influence
2006-10-19
ch 1,
abuseinteresting...could it be...Gen...maybe Amber...maybe Dee?
incandescente
2006-10-19
ch 1,
abusethis is very interesting! a brand new twist to the cliche stories around.. :) continue writing! i wonder if the persona's amber.. heh.
yourroyalqueenrandom
2006-10-19
ch 1,
abuseLol. I like it. It shows promise. Update soon. :)
bookface31
2006-10-19
ch 1,
abuseThat's awesome, because I didn't expect that the narrator was one of them; she sounds like she hates them, except for when she says that the girls are good friends.

Can I make a prediction...? I think the narrator is Amber, but that's just me. If I'm wrong, I owe you one.

This is a very interesting story, and has a lot of potential. I can't wait to see what you do with it!!

Keep writing, please!

--bOOkface31--
darlingnicotine
2006-10-19
ch 1,
abuseC:
love it!
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