Simple yet powerful.

I love this, as of having felt this way often. You convey your imagery wonderfully.

hardcore in it's purest form :).

love the "after thought"-ness of the last line.

hm, it reminds me of this story i read about before. well, maybe its history, the story of Bonnie & Clyde. just the idea of a car and flying down the road. good poem

keep writing