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| Tytherpol 2007-03-19 ch 1,  | abuseThis has a really nice rhythm and easy-going tone. I like it. :] ~Sara. |
| Basara 2006-11-01 ch 1, | abusebe ready for the price to pay when your free ok? nice... |
| polka dots and addictions 2006-10-30 ch 1, | abusei can really relate to this, & i love the last line. nicely written. ~Bex xx |
| Left On The Shelf 2006-10-24 ch 1, | abuseI know that feeling. Don't we all wish to be free in spirit. I'm too scared to get in trouble to do it, though, el oh el. |
| Travis C. Eckert 2006-10-23 ch 1, | abuseGood, though this would most likely qualify for most, doesn't for you, maybe its what you want to do. |
| angel953 2006-10-20 ch 1, | abusegreat job! i know exactly how you feel! |
| call me ish 2006-10-19 ch 1, | abuseJust be careful because trust me, it's way too eay to lose yourself on streets paved with ecstasy when youre walking hand in hand with devilboys. but yeah, i loved this line a whole lot, "loose my breath/ and never get it back." that was cool :). |
| Ironic Presence 2006-10-19 ch 1, | abuseThat's exactly how I feel. Your poem spoke to me. Good job |
| hateandkill-D 2006-10-19 ch 1, | abuseCool. Sounds like fun. Just don't hit a spray paint can with a shovle... yeah, not a good expirence there... Anyway, Great job on this! I really like it. Wonderful job. Keep it up! |
| Catcher in the Rye 2006-10-19 ch 1, | abuseI know that feeling and I know it well, but unfortunatly I won't be free until I'm 18. Very well written poem. I liked it alot! |
| Frore 2006-10-19 ch 1, | abuseAh, yes. This poem expresses the longing that we all have, deep down inside, to be free and unrestricted. Good work. |