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| Osunale 2006-10-29 ch 1,  | abuseExcellent use of color. You use only two, but these two seem to encompass the whole array of necessary feeling. Excellent piece. |
| Moondog Dozier 2006-10-20 ch 1, | abuseExcellent use of color to describe mood and emotion. Well written, as it speaks to how we can ward off the negative issues in our life if we have a place to evaluate and dispense with them before they overtake us. |