I really really like this! It describes me completly. I interpreted it as a boyfriend and you, or a twisted family and you. Or just some girl. Anyways, I love it! Great Job!

This is really good. Everyone feels like this at some point so it's easy to relate to. :]

Well done! I like the repition; it flows very nicely. I think my favorite line is,

'I'm the girl/Whose head is in a whirl'

No idea why, but I guess because I can relate to that a lot right now.

-Jackie

I liked it. I felt like this a lot in high school which made this poem very interesting. The thing I like a lot about your poetry is that I can relate to it. As far as I can see, everything rhymed correctly. And as always, keep writing!

i'm totally bored rite now... dun worry.. your poem's pefectly fine..

this is very well written, i think. it follows a single train of thought without getting lost in it's own rhymes or anything. and the ending is perfect.

It's a lovely poem. OneShot. Whatever it is. It's really good, I love your shoice of words that you've used, it's really awesome! Your rhyming is good, I find that the length of this is perfect. It isn't too long and it isn't too short. It's really awesome, I really feel for this person. I definitely do. The words you've chosen are a nice choice because you make it seem like reality...if you get what I mean. I hope you do.

:)

-TearsofAutumn

this is really cool. i don't think it's too long or too short, the rhyming is good, and it's a good poem. I almost think whoever it's about is being a little ** themselves. good poem though.