I love how it's told in narrative, yet it's also so abstract. The tone is so... dark and hopeless... Brilliant. I indentify well with it. Finding that line between too childish and too racey. It's so hard. However, you make it beautiful.

oh, **. just **. i would cry, but i've forgotten how. this makes me hurt. this is me. and it hurts.

This is great. So sad and really makes a point with perfect imagery. Well done x

well goddamn. you just blew me away.

It's very well written. I hate writing reviews because they always sound horrible, but how else would i be able to let you know I love your pieces.

Gorgeous. Just, oh my god.

It was beyond what I would expect.

- Noelle

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we all have a date, dont we?

this makes me shiver. you're amazing. especially that first stanza- god, just sosogood.

Oh.. damn.. wow. Not really sure what to say about this,.. it's that good.

Aah I so love it when you write new things :)
This seems so foreboding, like a prelude to a one-shot or something. It's so sultry and almost morbid. Love it.

wow, i don't even know what to say about this. speechless -- short, simple, but powerful.