such sadness, such pretty phrases.

So sad, but well written. The rhyme scheme and the flow is great, and I like the feeling you've put into this. Well done and keep writing.

omg. i love it so much. Ik exactly how u feel! I love it so much i cant even explain how much really. It flows nicely and is very relatable. love it love it love it!

Favorite stories list definitely!

i think this is the best one you've written that i've read. i like the first verse best.