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Catseye*Rose 2008-07-07 ch 21,	abuseThis was such a good story! Fun, dramatic, angsty, romantic... It was a very nice balance. I like how things started out pretty lighthearted, slowly got more and more depressing, and then started going back to lighthearted. I really enjoyed reading it! You also made the characters seem very realistic, especially when dealing with Daniel and Michael. And Chris was such a sweetheart ^^ Anyway, loved it lots!
Bra-Two 2008-06-03 ch 21, anon.	abuseI loved this story from beginning to end. The only thing I could critisize wasn't even in the story itself. At the very beginning you mention that the views on twincest weren't meant to offend anyone who liked it. Unfortunately, because of that, by chapter five I had already sussed out most of the plot line. However! That didn't make me enjoy the story any less! This story is /amazingly/ good. And dear god, how much do I love Alex? Too much. I can't wait until you make sequel involving him. I will be a faithful reviewer of that. >.
DeadnightWarrior 2008-05-17 ch 21,	abuseGotta love Alex, eh? He's just too cute. Anyway, being the polite person I am I decided to leave a review, since I very much liked this story. I'll be sure to read the sequels, too. And now I'm going to check out your other stories, so be prepared to hear from me again :p
Vicious Hyperbolizer 2008-04-01 ch 21,	abuseThis is a good story, all in all, but there are a few things that bothered me. The two major problems I had were a) the frequent and un-noted time changes and b)the frequent and un-noted personality changes for Daniel. Other than that, some great slash fun.
Tee Elle Double Yew 2008-04-01 ch 21,	abuseThis story was very enjoyable and I love all the characters. You did a great job writing it.
kanari kireteru doll 2008-02-26 ch 21,	abuseNot the cleanist of endings and it was a little short but it was a HAPPY one, YEY! Okay, overall story comment time: I liked this, a lot, it was not a million chapters long, and wasn't -91 like some stories are. Each chapter was a good length and well organized, the only acception being the VERY beginning where the dates and such seemed a tad skewed. The interactions between Daniel and Micheal were well done, a lot of people would have had them being both fully consentual end of story. There were deffinatlly connections to the characters, but I felt that you could have made the readers become a tad more attached, perhaps if you went and gave everyone an idea as to how Daniel and Micheal's relationship had taken the turn, you did so slightly towards the end, but maybe a tiny more in-depth. It sounds like all I did was critique. Again though, there are NOT many stories that I can say came CLOSE to how you did this. Orcastrated tenderly and woven with literary words that far surpass most's comprehension. 8.5/10
kanari kireteru doll 2008-02-26 ch 20,	abuseDANIEL GET YOUR DAMN PANSY ** BACK THERE!
kanari kireteru doll 2008-02-26 ch 19,	abuseI am glad that he has a therapist with a God damn heart... aww Chris... that's a tough situation to have to deal with... the line between sanity and insanity is razor blade thin at times.
kanari kireteru doll 2008-02-26 ch 18,	abuse"Chris couldn't bring himself to ask if he was imagining lying in someone else's arms." this line killed me.
kanari kireteru doll 2008-02-26 ch 17,	abusea reflection onto the other... how sad that there love was ill-conceived and unrequited. DANIEL COME HOME!
kanari kireteru doll 2008-02-26 ch 16,	abuseI can say from personal experience that this is basically how the situations are handled too. A lot of doctors and nurses were indignet and... mah...
kanari kireteru doll 2008-02-26 ch 15,	abuse"According to us, the entire world is hung with rainbows." "So, your slasher perspective paints me as the only straight guy around?" Mark asked with amused curiosity. "You're straight?" Alex asked in mock-horror. "All my hopes and dreams, crushed -" I think I have had nearly this EXACT conversation with some friends before... creepy mate ^^
kanari kireteru doll 2008-02-26 ch 14,	abusestill loving it, I do not remember if I had commented on it but your word choice is exquiste (spelling is probably off, ignore if it is, I had exams all through today)
kanari kireteru doll 2008-02-26 ch 13,	abuseMy friend is a triplet and their mother is the same way: wanting them to attend everywhere together and the such... I'm sure if she could have it her way, she'd have all three girls dating triplet females and living next door to each other. X_X' DANIEL! HUGGLES HIM UNTIL HE IS SQUISHED TO MUFFIN FORM muffins are brilliant, though I must say my choice of poison is chocolate galce! =D
kanari kireteru doll 2008-02-26 ch 12,	abuseChris is soo brilliant for being so thoughtful

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