Wow. Just...wow. I love this so much. This was a VERY VERY good chapter, excellent detail and the feelings were expressed so well. Excellent!

That was a very good chapter, I love the bit about Michael becoming Daniel's shodow instead of the other way around. Also I like how Michael is more real now.

wow, this is so cool! Generally, i'm good at sensing plot twists and the like, but you just throw me for a loop. i think it must be the twin thing, truthfully; but anyway, this is awesome, i love it to bits!

terrific job

Very Good Chapter, and a great plot.

I think I've figured out what's taking place, but I won't guess. I'll just wait out the anticipation.

holy shit wtf? Did we just have like...a complete personality switch here or what? Or is Daniel really MIchael and they've just tricked everyone?1 I don't even know what's going on anymore x_X Yea, still liked the chapter but you've got me completely baffled. Bipolar people, I swear. . Update soon so I can figure out what's going on!

What? Huh?

I'm confused.. update soon!

Aiee!

-flails at-

Daniel!

D: I am strongly reminded of the time my mother would only read me one chapter of a book each night, and the PAIN this caused me. SEVER EMOTIONAL AND MENTAL SCARRING.

Except it's more like EACH WEEK with this one.

D:

-makes sinister predictions-

And Alex remains awesome, which I've mentioned before.

NO! You have the wrong twin idiots! He's tricked you! And so easily too. You got them switched around people! Come on, Chris you have to know that's not Daniel beside you! AIEE! -takes deep slow breaths- I've been the silent reader for a while but I just had to comment on this chapter. It's eating away at me! Excellent one none the less.

wow...seriously wasn't expecting THAT. totally weird...i thought MICHAEL was the creepy stalker. now i'm kinda worried here, too...wow. seriously not good. Terrific job, though, i thought it was awesome how you pulled the proverbial rug right from under our feet. did that make sense to you? because it totally made sense to me. but then again, i'm a bit of a...wacko. so yeah. terrific job, anyway!

dreamerdoll

Michael is supposed to be a jerk. But he's an interesting character, to be honest. I don't know what to think about him. Please update soon.

arrghh! Keep going, I need to know what happens. Very good story.

Wow, the phrase "the shit has hit the fan" seems really appropriate. I hope they realize that the are with the wrong twin soon and Michael is extremely creepy. Just this small snippet of his personality, how he manipulates everyone around him...Daniel was brave for putting up with him for as long as he had. Thanks for the update. It was a fun chapter.

THAT EVIL MICHAEL! i hate him, i can't believe he switched places with Daniel and turned his friends against him with out them knowing. Daniel should have said something! something michael wouldn't know, the kiss for example. they really need a code word or somehthing.

other than that, i love your story. its very well written and it really draws you in. keep writing!

Wow...That was Micheal, wasn't it? And Daniel that they found later? Wow. Poor Daniel...

This story is awsome. I love Mandy the gender-queer cat (...That is the cat's name, isn't it? It just struck me it might not be...) and everything else. Again, this story is great. Keep writing!

Dude way to go. Nice chapter you have to update because this time i don't know what's going to happen