|Reviews for My Shadow and Me|
| acousticbruises 2/26/08 . chapter 15
"According to us, the entire world is hung with rainbows."
"So, your slasher perspective paints me as the only straight guy around?" Mark asked with amused curiosity.
"You're straight?" Alex asked in mock-horror. "All my hopes and dreams, crushed -"
I think I have had nearly this EXACT conversation with some friends before... creepy mate
| acousticbruises 2/26/08 . chapter 14
still loving it, I do not remember if I had commented on it but your word choice is exquiste (spelling is probably off, ignore if it is, I had exams all through today)
| acousticbruises 2/26/08 . chapter 13
My friend is a triplet and their mother is the same way: wanting them to attend everywhere together and the such... I'm sure if she could have it her way, she'd have all three girls dating triplet females and living next door to each other. X_X'
DANIEL! *HUGGLES HIM UNTIL HE IS SQUISHED TO MUFFIN FORM* muffins are brilliant, though I must say my choice of poison is chocolate galce! D
| acousticbruises 2/26/08 . chapter 12
Chris is soo brilliant for being so thoughtful
| acousticbruises 2/26/08 . chapter 11
I am glad that I was right that they had the wrong twin because I was certain that the actions hadn't been Daniels!
I have a feeling that Michael won't take that as the end... I hope I'm wrong!
| acousticbruises 2/26/08 . chapter 10
How could Chris, Amber and Alex have been sure that they had even had Daniel in the first place! _ ... they need to label him with like... a temp tattoo er something... get him to pierce his lip or nose or eyebrow or bellybutton... THEY NEED AN IDENTIFYING FACTOR! *runs to read the next chapter*
| acousticbruises 2/26/08 . chapter 9
WHY WAS I RIGHT WHY COULDN'T I HAVE JSUT MISINTERPRETED YOUR ENGLISH AGAIN!
*TEARS* oh gosh... I understand about the whole "nonconsentual thing" though, I wrote a story based off of my friend's experience where his friend raped him and convinced him that it was consentual and that there was no such thing as non-consentual in homosexuality and...
| acousticbruises 2/26/08 . chapter 8
DANIEL! *HUG TACKLES THE POOR BABE* I have to say, I'm pretty damn sure I know where this is going *points to the warning at the first chapter, therefor the element of surprise MAY be gone?* but I'm hoping I'm WRONG... that's a slim chance I think *is getting big headed*
take a tack the the ballon I call a head, please if you need to!
| acousticbruises 2/26/08 . chapter 7
"Alex was a little too promiscuous sometimes..."
foreshadowing perhaps there?
Aside from that, I find it intresting you chose Daniel to go ask for advice rather than Chris... most people would have choosen Chris to go looking for help. I like what you did, though. D
| acousticbruises 2/26/08 . chapter 6
"Where people start with burning books, they end by burning people,"
Brilliant quote, VERY powerful, did you think that up all on your own? even if not, I applaud you for the appropriate incoorperation!
| acousticbruises 2/26/08 . chapter 5
The post cards to santa was an ADORABLE idea... I can so totally picture them if you were ever to publish this piece. D
| acousticbruises 2/26/08 . chapter 4
Lovely again, yet again I have a slight critique. I thought that this story was only taking place so far in the time frame of two days, yet Mark has already taken a test?
| acousticbruises 2/26/08 . chapter 3
This was cute! I have a concern though, as to Daniel's character... he was first shown as someone rather tentative or at least new to making friendships yet he was not very object to sharing a private phone call with people he did not know very well. It almost feels like there should be one more buffer chapter. Guilty as charged though, I'm a hypocrit in that resepect to an extent...
Ramble ramble ramble.
| acousticbruises 2/26/08 . chapter 2
sorry, I would have gotten further in your story yesterday, but fictionpress would not let me press a review and I saw no reason why I should continue without doing so P
jaja! your character Alex reminds me A LOT of a character in one of my other stories _
| acousticbruises 2/25/08 . chapter 1
Wow... this is brilliant, I mean it! And from one non-native English speaker to another, I promise you that your English is well! D
*goes to make a cup of tea to read with this*