Silly little Lea,getting herself goat horns. Does that hair growth spell have words that are similar with the goat horn spell? Because it would make perfect sense if she actually mispronounced the words. Or did I just read about the books first irregularity?

Cheers, chica!

I love this story and hope that you will completely revise & rewrite it once you're back!

Oh goodness, I love your story so far. I really can't decide if Sidyan is bad or not or if Greaeson himself is at all evil although he seems to be perfectly nice.
I can't wait to read more - are you going to continue fixing up the chapters and updating soon?
Please update soon!

I whole-heartedly agree with you. There is 'something' about this story. It's magical in it's simplicity. It's not raw or over done, I quote Goldilocks, 'It's just right'.

The characters, dialogue, setting, the plot- I am in love with all of it. I try and make it a point not to beg because it's painful for all the parties involved. But *please* continue with this story, it's too beautiful to remain incomplete!

x reeka

This story is so incredibly...well, charming, for lack of a better word. That's as close as I can get to how I feel when I read it- charmed and very, very intrigued. You make the style fit with the setting in a way that is better than some of the published authors I've read. From the first paragraph, I could almost feel your intended time period. It's wonderful.

Oh, and I love your talking animals. I like the idea that only the smartest can talk, and then even when they can, it only adds to their adorableness. Well, in Dust's case, anyway, because he's a cat. Other animals might not be the same. Bears or possums, for example, I don't find so adorable, talking or not.

'“Very small ones,” Dust commented in a tone that suggested he was trying to make her feel better.' -- That was my favorite line in the whole story. Well, so far. :)

And I do love superfluous magic.

By the way, I read Faery Cage, too, and was thrilled with the originality.

I was reading and reading
and totally lost track of time!
this story is soo GOOD! and
by the time i knew it, i was already at
chapter 18! PLEASE UPDATE! i love the story!
and i want to read more! And i have to wonder if he
is lying and is just trying to distract Graeson
so he can kill him. hm.
yeah, so PLEASE UPDATE :D

Awesome story. I love seeing how sidyan is gaining more courage as time goes on. I love how intricate the plot has been thus far. I can't wait to see how things turn out.

[“Don’t make me put your tongue in my pocket.”]

SIDYAN!! I love this man.

[Finally, he had time to except that I was capable of such evil.]

not to be nitpicking, but "accept".

[“Because I have found that after eight hundred years… I think I love my brother after all,”]

I giggled here.

OH MY GOD. HE TURNED THEM INTO CHESS PIECES. I LOVE THIS. Beautiful work! I hope you update soon, because I love this story.

I'd forgotten about the knight. I love how her mum lets him in... so kind ;)

I remember when she first started doing spells! awesome. and I love Dust.

oh no, not horns! what will she do?

I've forgotten if Holga is jealous at all about the husband thing...

Love Keti!

is it silly of me to be glad that you're writing this again? on the one hand, it's no longer complete... on the other, though, I GET TO READ IT AGAIN!

I read "ace" just to brush up my memory on the story, and I got excited about it all over again. games, stars, magic, YAY.

great chapter. love Dust.

He turned them into a chessboard! My goodness, lol, what a funny/screwed up man! I was getting all excited thinking I was going to get to see Grae again, oh well, at leaast Sidyan made it interesting...he is an interesting fellow and brings something to the story, he's quirky, I like that. However I am fairly excited about seeing Grae again, I love him. Anyway doing a marvelous job on this story if I must say, I cannot wait till you update again, I am much looking forward to it!

Brilliant so far! Grae is so sweet, sending her all those gifts and stuff - I hope he stays sweet and all.

Oh and absolutely love Keti! She is hilarious, lol, and she believes Sealea and Grae which is great! I especially love when she says...

“The most famous story of… well, what shall I call him?” Keti frowned, she seemed to be talking mainly to herself, “Uncle Grae, I suppose.”

Gold, seriously love this story!

*Sighs* This last bit was just absolutely beautiful! I have just read the whole story right now and you had me completely captivated from the first paragraph. You are an amazing writer and have some brilliant ideas! The whole thing was just awesome, I loved it! You're ideas were just so unique, from what I have read anyway. I cannot wait to keep reading the next parts to the story. Well done, and please keep up the good work, I have no doubts that you will though.

Good luck,
CamilleBelle,
xx.