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| Dalamar's Girl 2007-02-22 ch 4,  | abuseIntense...I love how Drake finds out about his transformation! |
| Dalamar's Girl 2006-11-18 ch 1, | abusewell you do have some errors. it sound salot like our fav. movie! Labyrinth! ok, i really like it alot. when'll you write more? |
| Rosemarine 2006-10-21 ch 1, | abuseWow. This thing is about as raw as a steak cleaved right off the cow. Very good plot, good dialouge, but you have some serious tense and gramitical issues going on here. When you write a story you A) write B) edit so it is readable C) edit some more D)show it to a friend for more editing and E)apply their comments and finalize your work. I, however have the opposite problem. I can write fine, but I'm notsogood at coming up with plots (see Predudice of Species and tell me what you think) |