I have noticed a small but common error in your work. You use the word 'aloud' when you are supposed to use the word 'allowed'. Aloud is when somebody says something out loud, and allowed is when you have permission. I thought it would be useful to tell you this as you seem to like the word allowed and it would be annoying to have to learn it later once it is drilled into your head even deeper.

I like this story although it seems to be a little confusing. Like I can't tell what is reality and what is Sadie's imagination. Rose's two-shots actually helped clarified things though. Sadie is funny and quirky which I hope is how you wanted her to be. I got addicted and wanted to see what would happen next and read the entire thing in one sitting. I don't think I could've handled it if I found this story when it was in-progress. I would actually like to find out dru's story which was never elaborated so there's still some more! ;)

awww it was very cute! great writing. can't wait to see what happens next :)

hi!
I'm loving your story! haha as of right now I think she could be cute with Jerry, but I'll keep reading. keep writing!

D dumbest story i've ever read and it is O.P (out of point) .

Hey there, this looks interesting, but I just wanted to point something out. Her height is extremely exaggerated. If heels made her 9 feet, then normally she would be around 8 and a half feet. Her feet would be way bigger. Not too mention she'd have a very short life expectancy and would likely have a lot of health problems. Just thought I'd point that out. Oh, and Gucci does make size 11 shoes.

I know this story is from like FOREVER ago, but I just found it. And can I say I loved it. All the relationships were so cute especially Sadie and Jerry. And when I read the part about splitting the crown in half, I was thinking "how King Solomon-like" of Sadie it was to do that. Too bad, I'm answering the question three years late. I still wanted to review, just so you know that your story was awesome and to thank you for writing it. Adios amiga! :D

ohmigoshhhhhhh...jerrryyyyyy ...is uber uber uber cuteeee...nd damn adorblelove himxoxox u have no idea of how much i cracked up dear..its bang on great job...totally love dem 333

And I love you as a writer! I love all your stories! ))) Hope to read more!

I love Sadie and Jerry equally, more so I love love looove this story! I love Sadie's personality. She cracks me up and so does Jerry. With the things that Sadie says and the way that they acted together. It's almost perfect! I just wanted a POV of Jerry so I know how he feels. I think it would've been sweeter that way. But that's just my opinion. Still, they're just perfect for each other! Thank you for making me laugh and making me feel the 3 fairies in my stomach along with Sadie. Lol. ))) I enjoyed it so much! Much love!

Lovinggg this story ! Just wanted to let you know that near the end, you repeated some sentences :) other than that, it's all going great ! :D

Congratulations, this has been added to the A Drop Of Romeo Humour archive with the following review:
Words cannot express my feelings for this story properly, each time I have read it, I have found myself crying with laughter.
It starts off with Sadie, the main character, ranting about her large feet (to which I can relate) and launches into a well thought out ‘Cinderella’ story. The main character Sadie is quirky and fun, completely in a world of her own as she twists situations in her life into fairy tale plots (including one amusing incident when a tiny dog becomes a dragon). Sally Can Wait very cleverly deals with Sadie’s slight tendency to be prejudiced, as it provides many humorous moments when she speaks aloud her beliefs that Jerry is a typical bad boy gang member, simply because he has ADHD and she met him in detention.
Jerry himself, really isn’t a bad boy, but a complete and utter sweetheart and it is heart-warming the way his friendship develops with Sadie over time and to watch how they interact.
The rest of the characters are superb, as Sally Can Wait never leaves anyone seeming flat. I particularly liked the conniving twins and the charming Brit, Erik, whom Sadie believes is her Prince Charming (ho hum).
Sally Can Wait’s prose is near flawless. As with anything, it has the occasional typing error, however this doesn’t detract from the story as a whole. And boy, what a story that is. The only thing I have to add is this: Go! Read it and tickle your funny bone (and no, not that one in your arm).

Awesome! I really like your writing style, especially where you end a happy scene/whatever with a awful or disturbing sentence, and then say your kidding, it makes me laugh a lot XD Thanks for sharing this great story!

Awesome :D well, beyond awesome, actually.

SGHFYUghFDJgfoh SO MUCH CUTENESS.