Reviews for Cinderella Never Saw This One Coming

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choc me 2008-07-11 ch 14,	abuseHey...Mae and Seth..aren't they characters from the fic where the girl -Mae- can read minds? Or is it some incredible coincidence or something? Love ur story btw!
Elfear 2008-06-29 ch 24, anon.	abuseI think that it is so sweet. And jerry is such a gentleman! But you could have done with a bit more characterisation. And it was a bit awkward for dru, flor and lucy to come in for a short while, then be completely gone off the story in the end. but, yeah, it was really sweet.
righthere431 2008-06-21 ch 1,	abusewow really interesting beginning =] good job! =]
HanLiv 2008-06-13 ch 4,	abuseOh. I'm enjoying this. I'm rooting for the Beast rather than the Prince, because I like his hair (&, being English, I don't really have a thing for English accents)... I didn't enjoy Cinderella Story though, because I wanted the sidekick to end up with the princess. Like I always do in pantomimes :)
musha 2008-06-08 ch 24,	abuseSince you are so adamant about reviews, and I admit I like them myself, I will leave you one for your sake. ;) I really like Jerry (though I don't like his nick name, but there are a lot of people in the world that have names I don't like but I still like as people, so whatever). Nice job with the twists; there were things I definitely was not expecting. Thank you for having perfect spelling and good grammar (as far as I noticed); it's a rare thing these days online. Good luck on the SKoW!
Of Roses and Thorns 2008-06-04 ch 1,	abuseThe story is great! though it does remind me of 'a Cinderella story', i still like it. and you did a very good job of making saddie an interesting character. did i spell her name right?
Frozen.by.Sloth 2008-06-02 ch 24,	abusewhy hello.. :) I just read the story. I must say I enjoyed immensely. It was fun and ultimately charming. I like the ideas, and I LOVE the frog. I loved the character of Emily's boyfriend, lol. He was fantastic. And Jerry also, my favorite two. Though, the only thing I find a bit.. I don't know, lacking, maybe? in the story is the intensity of the grand finale, you know, right before everything falls into place. And I'm glad Rose's role was explained, her behavior sorta annoyed me. However, this was really sweet. Thanks for sharing this, I'm glad. So... Keep writing, Enjoy~,
centenarian 2008-05-11 ch 24,	abuseWell, I read everything all in one go. I can't begin to explain all the cheesiness I felt, or how many times this made me laugh so hard that I thought I'd cry, or really just how perfect everything came together. Really, it is like a fairy tale in the end. It's a very good read. Nicely done.
righthere431 2008-05-04 ch 3,	abusehaha! omg!
righthere431 2008-05-04 ch 2,	abuselol whos the beast?
Emily 2008-05-04 ch 1, anon.	abuseuhm how about you grow some back bone, KAT. HOW DARE YOU SAY ANYTHING THAT STUPID TO MY CLIENT. its called CHARACHTER DEVELOPMENT. IF SHE WANTS HER CHARACHTER TO BE A WIMP SO BE IT. GET OVER IT YOU'LL NEVER WORK IN THIS TOWN AGAIN.
Kat 2008-04-27 ch 7, anon.	abuseHey, I'm sorry, I like the premise of your story, but your main character is a wimp!! It seems really unrealistic to me. Who in their right mind would let a small dog and a stupid lady scare them? It just seems ridiculous and it frustrates me a lot. I just think that she should get some back bone Kat
Super.Maddy 2008-04-10 ch 22,	abuseHey hey. Great Story. I so glad she ended up with Jerry. Good Job. Good luck with your other stories. xx Maddy
screamo 2008-04-04 ch 6,	abusei like
RunBabyRun 2008-03-26 ch 23,	abuseLol. MY name is Ariel. Im not suicidal =D. ANdi choke on food. Love ur lovely story.

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