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| writing-to-save-my-soul 2006-10-24 ch 1, | abusethis is great. i like it. hinted action with simple words. keep it up! |
| Guardrail 2006-10-20 ch 1, | abuseThis is very nicely written. The flow here is quite good. I like this, keep writing. |
| LoopyGirdlejuice 2006-10-20 ch 1, | abuseShort and sweet =] Loopy |