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Reviews For: Too bad he wasn't real

writing-to-save-my-soul
2006-10-24
ch 1,
abusethis is great. i like it. hinted action with simple words. keep it up!
Guardrail
2006-10-20
ch 1,
abuseThis is very nicely written. The flow here is quite good. I like this, keep writing.
LoopyGirdlejuice
2006-10-20
ch 1,
abuseShort and sweet =]

Loopy
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