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| glimpses from an ivory towe... 2007-06-07 ch 1,  | abuseFirstly, thank you for reviewing Mellifluous...I really wanted feedback on that one, as it's not my usual style/topic. Sorry you had to look up the meaning of the title, I tend to be obscure like that. "A simple confession, left behind like broken seashells." Oh, how brilliant. So unique and striking...perfect imagery. Your choice of words in this poem left me wondering what inspired in...regardless, it's beautiful. Your words painted a picture in my mind as I read it. Excellent work, and thanks again. Julia |
| breezy nostrils 2007-02-25 ch 1, anon. | abusei love the last stanza...it's so memerizing...nice job! |
| Idiot Pilot 2006-12-04 ch 1, | abuseI liked the lines about a tiny fragment of soul and the comparison of a simple confession being like broken seashells. |
| simpleplan13 2006-12-01 ch 1, | abuseI REALLY love that second to last stanza... awesome piece |
| Galadh Niniel 2006-11-26 ch 1, | abuseWonderful imagery. The first line reminded me of Macbeth's "here upon the bank and shoal of time". Beautiful poem. |
| plummet 2006-11-13 ch 1, | abuseI'm honestly...blown away. That was the best poem I've read in a long while; loved the tone, the idea, the wording...everything. Wonderful. Sorry I haven't reviewed for so long; my life's so hectic that I can't keep up with all your awesome poetry. =P |
| review 2006-11-06 ch 1, | abuseexcellent expression. all of your poems have...i don't exactly know, but i guess theyre just so expressive... stop by sometime. i posted a new work. |
| Suffering Beauty 2006-10-26 ch 1, | abuseI loved all the descriptive words you used in this. Can't think of the proper term at the moment, but that doesn't matter. One of my favorite lines is: "Scripted words in Silk, heartfelt wishes in blue ink." Very beautiful piece of writing. |
| KonekOniko 2006-10-26 ch 1, | abuseWow. I love the whole feel and tone of the poem. The imagery was especially powerful in this piece. Heh, I love it! Hope to see you update soon |
| Aquafied 2006-10-26 ch 1, | abusei am personally one for nostalgia but it becomes dry after a while |
| multiples of six 2006-10-26 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. Other than that I don't really know what to say about it.. just all-around beautiful.. |
| HgBookworm 2006-10-25 ch 1, | abuseVery nice poem. I like the imagery and the deeper meanings behind the lines. It all sounds so lovely put together. May you always feel inspiration whenever you sit down to write... -HgBookworm |
| Kat-Renee Kittel 2006-10-24 ch 1, | abuseBeautifully sad and joyful. Thanks for the new poem. Reni =^..^= |
| Dr. Colleen 2006-10-24 ch 1, | abuseI especially liked the last line "A simple confession, left behind like broken seashells". How true that is... My sister would always collect seashells whenever we went on vacations with the family. I would try to help her,but she wouldalways reject the ones I picked up. They weren't perfect, they'd be chipped, and she wouldn't want them. So too are simple confessions left behind. I enjoy your poems. There's a mystical, dreamlike quality to them. They also possess the effortless quality that only a gifted person can invoke. Cheers, |
| Susuka 2006-10-24 ch 1, | abuseAh, such a deep poem. I enjoyed reading it, and you have a very unique style that I doubt anyone could ever imitate. I also found your pen name to be interesting as well. I believe it means Heart of Water, am I right? Anyways, thank you for the review and I hope you enjoyed the ramblings of a new fan of your work. |