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| rebellionVII 2007-10-22 ch 1, | abuseOMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG i found you i finally, actually found you omg i don't know if you remember me, but way back when, in 2005, i read this story on a geocities site. I was the only one who left you messages. you got discouraged and 'gave up', but you sent the project eve manuscript to me to read. and i found you! you have no idea how fulfilled i feel right now. i'm glad you've reposted. so glad. you were Eerm, back then. i've been looking for you for two years. two years, goddamnit! sorry. a bit of a rant going on here :) you know how i feel about this story. if you remember . . . lots and lots and TONNES of love from your first and biggest fan, lucy |
| killer chipmunk 2007-01-26 ch 16, | abuse0-0-=0-0-P986;HKL. |
| killer chipmunk 2007-01-21 ch 15, anon. | abuseI love this story and this chapter was good.I like the way it's written.Expect for the whole secret service thing it's really rather realistic.I like it. |
| killer chipmunk 2007-01-20 ch 14, anon. | abuseIt seemed kinda of short but it was good. I didn't really like the part where she dared him to say something.It's not that I don't like it I just think that word "dared" wasn't the right word maybe a different word would sound better.Not to be mean or anything. |
| Operation Miranda 2006-12-29 ch 12, | abuseOh my god, this story had me hooked from the beginning girl scout scene. Your plot is just great- fresh and intriguing. It's a bit unbelievable at times- as my drama teacher says you have to sort of suspend your disbelief, but it might be boring if it was realistic. I must say, though, that I found the scene with the 'blowfish' a bit disturbing. She's 14 and all these 20-something guys are talking about how hot she is? I mean sure, stuff like that happens, but EW! |
| CHIIJOY 2006-12-22 ch 11, | abuseO drama! Update soon, please. :D |
| akc 2006-12-16 ch 10, | abusei LOVE it! Especially the blackjack part! Though I have to tell you, while I was reading this, it reminded me of Alias... It was actually the reason I kept on reading... I LOVE missions! And the issues the agents get, also! UPDATE soon! |
| DesertRose2450 2006-11-07 ch 4, | abuseOnce again, another great chapter. I'm interested to read more about this Blowfish guy. |
| DesertRose2450 2006-11-01 ch 3, | abuseGreat chapter. I'm soo glad that Wade is going to be Eve's new partner. Keep up the good work! |
| DesertRose2450 2006-10-27 ch 2, | abuseThis chapter was GREAT! What is going to happen to Wade? Keep up the good work! |
| DesertRose2450 2006-10-27 ch 1, | abuseWow! This was really good, you have me hooked! I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work! |
| Suffering Beauty 2006-10-26 ch 2, | abuseDun dun dun! You have me hooked. I want to know what happens to Walker now! So exciting. Please update soon. The only problem I had was with the page breaks, or the line things. You had them in the wrong places, and it seriously bothered me. And also, you might want to use more descriptive adjectives to "butter up" the story. It would make it seem more interesting and more real. |