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| Mistress of the Tormented 2006-10-21 ch 1,  | abuseyea the verbs are arent the same everywhere but it's very very very good. It's kinda happy... weird hearing it from you. Buti love it! To the ex planet of pluto and back! |
| behindstonewalls 2006-10-20 ch 1, | abusedefinitely not what i expected with that title, very good though, but the verb tenses don't agree, some are present tense "I look up at the sky" and some are past tense "More of the flecks fell", good job though, keep writing |