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| Ronikka Kendall 2007-03-19 ch 1,  | abuseShort, sweet, and true. ^^ |
| Reborn As I 2007-02-27 ch 1, | abusei like it. except that i don't think the "the"s before "God" and "destiny" belong there. i know you need the syllable count in a haiku, but perhaps you could find another way? |
| Yeeger 2007-01-15 ch 1, | abuseShort, yet still beautiful. I love it. ~Yeeger |
| TalkingMime 2006-12-17 ch 1, | abuseShort, sweet, and to the point. I like the metaphor. |
| Basara 2006-10-22 ch 1, | abuseyeah...we never choose our ending... he does... sometimes quite unfair... nice... |
| Isabell Clarke 2006-10-21 ch 1, | abuseThis haiku was really good. I could never write those... Thanks! Isabell Clarke |