Ooh... Is that dementia or schizophrenia I see? Wicked writing, I luved it.

wow spooky cool!
i liked the tension btwn the sisters- reminds me of my sister's keeper?!

That would freaking suck. Good story and I love the plot!

Wow, this is so good. Its kinda spooky...I have a younger sister and now I am offically somewhat scared of her!

I LOVE THIS! It's so neat how there is another side to things. Maybe make a story like this?
Thanks for the enjoyment!
Isabell Clarke

It's really interesting the point of view, and I think you've done a nice job of making it work (: Keep writing.