|Reviews for Two Men & Too Much Alcohol|
| hongdl 1/8/11 . chapter 1
Nice and original. I like how this story consists of only dialogue,though the organisation of the lines themselves confuses me read.
| HPRK08 5/15/10 . chapter 1
Amazingly original, great job. :)
| Mark Piersley 12/6/08 . chapter 1
lol...pretty original. witty dialogue.
| AyumiYuy 4/1/08 . chapter 1
Hah. That was fun. Initially the "words words" ... "more words on same line" confused me though. ; Why not just say "words words ... more words on the same line" to avoid confusion? But no problem, I figured it out. P
| j.c-chic 1/10/08 . chapter 1
| A Quirky Tale 6/16/07 . chapter 1
Huh. I actually like this. It's quite witty and I admire the dry humor. ;)
| temblance 1/3/07 . chapter 1
This was a nice example of how dialogue can completely carry a story. The characters here felt more fleshed out than some of the ones I have read from other stories on this site-nice job with that. The concept was very interesting and original as well, very cool to see how a straight man would act at a gay bar :)
| la mocha 12/19/06 . chapter 1
I like this. It's very orginal.
| bluerinse 11/29/06 . chapter 1
very funny and original me likes )