Nice and original. I like how this story consists of only dialogue,though the organisation of the lines themselves confuses me read.

Amazingly original, great job. :)

HPRK

lol...pretty original. witty dialogue.

Hah. That was fun. Initially the "words words" ... "more words on same line" confused me though. ; Why not just say "words words ... more words on the same line" to avoid confusion? But no problem, I figured it out. P

HAHAHA

Huh. I actually like this. It's quite witty and I admire the dry humor. ;)

This was a nice example of how dialogue can completely carry a story. The characters here felt more fleshed out than some of the ones I have read from other stories on this site-nice job with that. The concept was very interesting and original as well, very cool to see how a straight man would act at a gay bar :)

Nice work.

I like this. It's very orginal.

very funny and original me likes )