Yes I’ve enjoyed reading your work!

I really don’t know why I liked it…
maybe because the narration was good..
I can really imagine myself into the story because of the way the events, the background and the characters were described….
perhaps because it showed the reality nowadays….
Or perhaps this was one of the most disturbing story I’ve read…

For whatever reason it maybe…
The bottom line is.. I liked it! (hooray! In the background)

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My favourite line is "This was the only entry for this contest so it won by default (hooray!)"... I'm sorry, but that cracked me up so bad.

To the Author, it's a great story... but I don't really understand it... could you clarify it for me?

-Steph

bravo!

God... This is... Really deep. I'm impressed. You're very talented.

i really liked it
nice job
favorites :)

That was deep ur a great writer
:)

i like it

i dont know what to say... but.. it was... different.

Wow. **. Loved it.

I loved the meaning behind it, the originality. Stories don't need fancy poetry and descriptions in order for it to be good.

Keep up the great work.

Interesting story. There's a lot to say about it, perhaps a bit too much.

I understand what you mean about the masses on fp being generally a waste of gigabytes of space, I shall try to read some of the works by others in this little group, see if they are as good as I hope they are.

Alan,