 painted eyes 2008-07-10 . chapter 1Lovely imagery of the wind. I love the idea of it carrying nature's secrets!
Keep up the good work!
~painted |
 Travis C. Eckert 2006-10-24 . chapter 1A nice haiku that makes perfect sense. |
 Galadh Niniel 2006-10-24 . chapter 1Lovely image, fits the autumn atmosphere. |
 Kalopsia 2006-10-22 . chapter 1i swear i feel the wind! good job |
 greenGalilee 2006-10-22 . chapter 1Great haiku. The word choice is really good: it feels like the wind is moving through the poem and blowing the words away as you speak them. |
 Basara 2006-10-22 . chapter 1describes the wind alright...
nice... |
 An-Author-At-Heart 2006-10-21 . chapter 1Nice. It described the wind so acurately and beautifully. A good representation of a haiku. |
 Melanie Layugan 2006-10-21 . chapter 1Sweet and short.
Describes what the wind is actually is.
Charmed.
Melanie Layugan |