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painted eyes 2008-07-10 . chapter 1
Lovely imagery of the wind. I love the idea of it carrying nature's secrets!

Keep up the good work!
~painted
Travis C. Eckert 2006-10-24 . chapter 1
A nice haiku that makes perfect sense.
Galadh Niniel 2006-10-24 . chapter 1
Lovely image, fits the autumn atmosphere.
Kalopsia 2006-10-22 . chapter 1
i swear i feel the wind! good job
greenGalilee 2006-10-22 . chapter 1
Great haiku. The word choice is really good: it feels like the wind is moving through the poem and blowing the words away as you speak them.
Basara 2006-10-22 . chapter 1
describes the wind alright...

nice...
An-Author-At-Heart 2006-10-21 . chapter 1
Nice. It described the wind so acurately and beautifully. A good representation of a haiku.
Melanie Layugan 2006-10-21 . chapter 1
Sweet and short.
Describes what the wind is actually is.
Charmed.

Melanie Layugan
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