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| half-sketched.staccatos 2007-06-16 ch 1,  | abusekonban wa I love that last line, how you didn't write "someone has to be strong" but "someone has to LOOK strong" - like you're not really strong and just pretending to be. That the only reason you don't do it is because you're too cowardly to do it. Although it's a bit unnerving to think that that's what's stopping the cutting ... Zaijen -Shan- |
| Seventh Chords 2006-10-23 ch 1, | abuseVery nicely written. You've got a real flair for poetry; your ability to communicate your emotions and perspectives in such an earnest, yet poignant way is truly worthy of recognition. |
| concrete.stone 2006-10-22 ch 1, | abusewow...i think i got a tear...beautiful! |