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| Takhisis 2008-03-09 ch 1, | abuseMan! Words from the heart. Poems like these are obviously the best. The thing i like about this poem is that it rhymes a lot. |
| Lurid Black 2008-01-11 ch 1, | abuseSweet, really well written, needs no improvement. All words chosen carefully. Keep writing! ~Lurid~ |
| thecolourgrey 2007-11-10 ch 1, | abuseAh...i am undergoing the same thing, so i can really put myself in your place. Very relatable. Good work. |
| undescribableMONiiCA. 2006-10-23 ch 1, | abuseI can closely relate to this poems. I have lost a best friend and have wondered whether the friendship was there to begin with. |
| concrete.stone 2006-10-22 ch 1, | abuseyou caught the sense of reality in this and nothings better then a poem that does that...loved it |
| sweetxbliss 2006-10-22 ch 1, | abuseAw, those are the worst ways to lose friendships, I think. It was a good poem however! -SweetXBliss |