Love the pacing. A situation I can connect to.

Man! Words from the heart. Poems like these are obviously the best.

The thing i like about this poem is that it rhymes a lot.

Sweet, really well written, needs no improvement.

All words chosen carefully.

Keep writing!

Lurid

Ah...i am undergoing the same thing, so i can really put myself in your place. Very relatable. Good work.

I can closely relate to this poems. I have lost a best friend and have wondered whether the friendship was there to begin with.

you caught the sense of reality in this and nothings better then a poem that does that...loved it

Aw, those are the worst ways to lose friendships, I think.

It was a good poem however!

-SweetXBliss