Huh. This is a really interesting piece that you wrote. I don't really know how to describe it, but it's really good. Your summary was funny too! Heehee.

I'm not sure if this was what you were going for, but to me it felt like the medication was sort of a symbol for the dulling effect that religon has on the soul (like how Christians did alot of things that Christ spoke out against, and that kind of stuff).
ALso, i took it to mean that religon is sort of forcfed the same way that a schizo is forcefed medicine. Like i said, not sure if that was your meaning but that message came off really strong to me in this one.

BTW, glad to find a fellow Pagan ^__^ so im happy now lol. Hope to see more soon!