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| fallin4ualwayz 2007-07-01 ch 1,  | abusegr whoever did that 2 u is clearly a d*head! great poem though |
| Her Wishing Well 2007-06-25 ch 1, | abuseThis great i like the powerful emotions that are captured within the words. |
| ShadowFane 2007-02-25 ch 1, | abuseI loved this lots. Beautiful, but sad. Full of emotion. Loved it lots! SF |
| call me ish 2006-12-25 ch 1, | abuseand sometimes' that s the hardest part. knowing that it's over when you can't help but hope(pray.plead. b e g) for it to all be better again. to go back to a time when happily ever after was possible. this was excellent |
| RaindropsOnBlackRoses 2006-11-02 ch 1, | abuseI really like this poem. I would have read it and reviewed to it earlier, but I've been super busy. Anyway, you're an awesome writer. |
| Anani Moose 2006-10-29 ch 1, | abuseThis is very depressing...I love it! The imagery of the cliff and the ocean is lovely, and I can identify with it partially, if not completely. Nicely written! |
| Twilit Exaggerance 2006-10-27 ch 1, | abuseBruises as purple butterflies... You're a very talented poet. I cannot infuse my sheer joy at this poem with words, because it was simply that good! *clicks Fave Stories* |
| Taltush/MeiMei 2006-10-24 ch 1, | abuseWowowowoowow. Amazing. It's starts out kind of peaceful, then kind of "oh... my"-ful, and then ends sad and creepy. That's incredible. |
| mushoo 2006-10-22 ch 1, | abusewow..this poem's amazing. it made me feel like I was the one on that cliff. i especially liked this stanza, "and i wish you were right here… screaming along with me, (because i deserve you)" it's really well written. simple but yet powerful and the last line really speaks to me. Great job! |
| Guardrail 2006-10-21 ch 1, | abuseGreat imagry here. The first stanza was so clear it was like I was on the cliff too. This is very wonderfully written and the emotion is clear. I especially liked the line, "(the purple butterflies flying up my arm)". Well done. Keep writing. |