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| PrincessPeaches 2008-03-07 ch 1, | abuseoh wow, I can relate to this. That's a good idea actually 'Best Friends For Never'! Brilliantly written poem!! loved it! |
| Lurid Black 2008-01-11 ch 1, | abuseSweet, the words were chosen with deep thought, really well written, needs no improvement, also very powerful. Keep writing! ~Lurid~ |
| Mother Nature's Daughter 2006-10-25 ch 1, | abuseThis is good...great, actually...I love the "Best Friends For Never" line..that was really neat. it flows really nice. I can't imagine a true friend would ever do that to someone...that's really low..none of my friend's have ever done anything that bad, tho there have been ocassions where things have gone wrong...even tho i can't relate completely, thro ur poem I can see how awful it must be..i really like it...wonderful job.. |
| pirategal101 2006-10-24 ch 1, | abuseaww this is sad, but very true I think everyone has had at least 1 friend like that, its sad but also a fact of life. Good Poem:) |
| concrete.stone 2006-10-22 ch 1, | abuseokay this...is a sweet ** poem:) |
| Keira Kentai 2006-10-22 ch 1, | abusePretty good and I, too, like it when cat fights start raging. If this was true, sounds quite nasty. Thank goodness I don't have that problem... |
| Taylary Daisuke 2006-10-21 ch 1, | abuseHm, I guess poetry is one way to release the pain. Personally, I enjoy when gorls solve their problems with catfights but, it's really good. Nice work |