oh... it's so sweet! Poor Theodora!

Thats so great. I like the truth you put in from guys. They are as gullible as hell!

Well, it's much better. There ae some cool words, and more detail, which is nice. I see my fingerprints :)-

I know that I don't say this enough, but you've quite a writer in you, kiddo--I mean, oh ancient and decrepid one.

Still, you're gonna hate me when you see what I've done with it. Just remember, if I didn't like it, I wouldn't torture you like this. *nods sagely*

Very interesting! I am now hooked! :-)

Very interesting! I hope that here is more. I also speak French too and love LOTR!

I wish someone would read this story!