 LeoOsaka 2006-10-25 . chapter 1 I like the idea you have here, but the repetitions were kinda distracting...Just a side note, I do like how you trailed toward the end, dropping off the repetitions to get the the final point. It added a nice atfer effect XD!
(*Looked at your profile* xD Still a FFII Nerd eh? XD I applaud you biatch XD!) |