Nice, I really like the emotion in this. The line, "I've dedicated myself, when love had made me blind." is especailly good. Great work and keep writing.

I like the idea you have here, but the repetitions were kinda distracting...Just a side note, I do like how you trailed toward the end, dropping off the repetitions to get the the final point. It added a nice atfer effect XD!

(*Looked at your profile* xD Still a FFII Nerd eh? XD I applaud you biatch XD!)