I loved it! Good work!

Aw...it's so swet and sad and cute and good...aw...

Sweet, the words were chosen with deep thought, and lead onto awesome rhymes, well written, needs no improvement.

Keep writing!

Lurid

hey lee, s'ousia

ive read this before, but i thought i'd review.

this is really very good. it's sweet and true, and i LIKE IT.

Yeah, I know what you mean. I moved 200 miles from my home last year and when I go back, it feels different seeing my old mates. Some of them, though, I think we'l be mates forever, regardless.

Good poetry.

Alan.

*claps* I like it, I can say the same about me and alot of my friends and I like poetry I can relate to