Well, I for one really liked this story. I always like stories with people with Extraordinairy Abilities working for Secret Agencies fighting all sorts of World-threatening Baddies. What are the chances of writing more stories that go along with exciting tale? I really would like to see some more.

Besides a few, (again) comma problems, or the like, it's good.
Still, there's something quite awkward that I cannot quite place my finger on.
It's as if I don't get a visualization in my mind of ANYTHING happening at all.
I know what's going on, but don't really have an image.

Might be you-- could be me.

Ah well.

- Atari