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| DunxDunxDunx 2006-12-23 ch 1,  | abuseaw i love it especially the last few lines it really ties the poem together its always great to have a friend who is always there for you && will always listen |
| Kalopsia 2006-10-22 ch 1, | abusewhat a good friend is! |
| xForeverAndAlwaysx 2006-10-22 ch 1, | abusemay i ask if you gave this to your friend? if you didn't, you should certainly consider it, because it's beautifully written. i write poems adressed to people all the time, but i rarely give them away, so i understand if you don't want to, caz writing can be really personal - (and yeah, i'm rambling now.) but anyway, your poem is gorgeous. ive had people like this in my life and its just this amazing feeling - a feeling that you've captured very well here. i love this, 'i pulled away / but you followed me' - i can totally relate to that. great great work. i really like this. |
| mizu no kokoro 2006-10-22 ch 1, | abuseits nice to have friends who care =] good work keep writing |