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| glamoureste 2008-07-18 ch 15,  | abuseAh! update soon! Maddie is so cute. and i watch ugly betty! it's my favorite show ever. in the 3rd season, i know that she definitely doesn't choose henry, and then soon after, gio's gone, and she gets a new man... hah. |
| TheXcoolestXloserXyouXknow 2007-10-25 ch 15, | abuselol.. henry from ugly betty IS cute :D haha. so random. but yeahh i wanna read more :]] |
| The Shadows' Sunrise 2007-07-08 ch 15, | abuseplease update soon. :) I personally think that Luke likes Lena and Zach likes Madison. Why you ask? I have know idea, well, i do but that would take all of the fun away! Please update soon! good luck on exams! |
| Isabella22 2007-06-06 ch 15, anon. | abuseGreat chap! Update soon! (am interested in what happens next!!) |
| kstar129 2007-05-29 ch 15, | abusePoor poor girl!Too many cute guys!I've got this weird feeling that Luke did it with somebody and is now avoiding maddy.Just a feeling.Please write more! |
| Nara Merald 2007-05-28 ch 15, | abuseShe starts crying?! Wow, that was a little random. I'm interested to see Zach's reaction though. |
| No Ordinary Girl 2007-05-27 ch 15, | abusehiya! this is a nice update! i'm so glad you got time to do it! i missed this story thoroughly! i really am so curious as to how the romance issue is working out between the chars. please, oh please, let your exams go well! you have my luck and my well wishing! *smile* much love, and i can't wait until your next update! *grin* latuh ~bleu |
| sakura2u 2007-05-26 ch 15, | abusethis is cute. i think that madison likes zach. please up date soon. |
| s-pecial-lee me 2007-05-25 ch 15, | abuselol! haha love it! keep it up. update soon |
| sara 2007-05-25 ch 3, anon. | abuseok the chapter are really good but there is one thing you have wrong. im indian and indians do NOT MARY THEIR COUSINS THATS FLIPPIN NASTY! you have us confused with the MIDDLE EASTERN PEOPLE-they marry their own cousins and for those people who dont look on the globe the middle east and india and totally different people and countries... so yeah just fix that and it'll be perfect -sara |
| SummerBaby94 2007-04-12 ch 14, | abuseI love how you have so much drama but not so much that it gets cheesy... love it =]... update soon |
| Gentle. Edge. 2007-03-18 ch 14, | abuseaw, uma likes tommy. that's pretty funny...yet sad... |
| Saniaaa 2007-03-13 ch 14, | abusehey, Trust me you don't want me to get started. Rambling, I mean. I could go on forever. Anyway, the chapter was good. Cute even. Maddy's closeness with her brothers are really sweet. I look forward to next chapter and Zach! :D |
| s-pecial-lee me 2007-03-13 ch 14, | abusehaha. wat happened to zach? and luke? and jesse? where are the guys? anyways. keep it up |
| No Ordinary Girl 2007-03-11 ch 14, | abusewell, i only have time for a quick review, it's late, and i've been working all day. few things: -jeez, tommy's shallow -ah, haven't seen luke, 'cause he's too busy macking on lena (dirty whores the both of them) -jared is so adorably sad. i'm curious about the whole michelle thing, hopefully we'll get to see something about that if possible -I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE ZACH AND JESSE CONFUSION! AH! It's so mindboggling! i think Zach's really got a lot of potential to be someone really great and Jesse was the first kiss and AW >< wow! it's great! I'M SO EXCITED! o.O and now sleep deprivation is creeping in and i must depart. much thanks for the message and i will keep checking the inbox for an update! ~bleu *grin* |