It's a beautiful peice of poetry. Normally I'm not a bit poetry person... but that was wonderful!

Wow. I love the way you ended this, and it's so terribly sad. Good job.

this has a lot of emotion in it! it's definitely one the best suicide poems i've read in a while.

great job! keep up the good work!

This poem evoked a lot of emotions in me. However, your last line "Were you lucky? Definitely not." is a weak ending. I mean this as constructive criticism. The second to last line would end it strongly and perfectly. Other than that I really enjoyed the poem. Thank you for your review earlier last month, and I'm sorry I took so long in returning your review. :)