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incandescente 2007-09-25 . chapter 1
But come to think of it, you seem to be the only one who has ever stayed oh-so-stubbornly- - I think you have an extra dash.

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Personally speaking, I feel for you. Because I know what you mean, been through those restless thoughts that things arent so cookie cutter clear.

On the story writing basis, I felt that this was just a snapshot into the character. I knew what the writer was talking about, but I felt some descriptions could have been better. :)

All the best for your exams, and jiayou. It's always darkest before the storm.
ME 2006-11-17 . chapter 1
this is like a diary entry.. i'm not experienced, can't give god advice.. but i do know, get him outta your head! JIA YOU! it's gonna be hard, but you have people surrounding you if you ever find yourself wanning is stregth or will.. ^^
Frore 2006-10-23 . chapter 1
Wow, your rants are much more coherent than mine. Your situation was revealed without the addition of an author's note, which is something that doesn't usually come with fictionpress stories.
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