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| KichiKaen 2007-08-26 ch 6,  | abuseI've been waiting agez for this story to update, and because it was a long time i kinda forgot about the characters and had to read all the chapters again... but the story's good -thumbs up- ^_^ |
| Kakyou Takashiro 2007-07-28 ch 5, | abusehaha. i actually find this a lot more humorous than it is hard-drama. but then again. maybe that's just a personal thing. haha. well i must say. this was a great read. the chapters are a little on the short side, but i guess it adds to the effect of the story. i wish there was a little more character development, but having your chapters separated between a school life manga series and a online-gaming section really adds to the mystery of what's going, and that's probably what kept me reading the most. can't wait for more. kakyou |
| Niki Tori 2006-10-24 ch 3, | abuseWell again another very short chappie. Still good though...but I wanted to read more!! ~_~ well I guess I'll have to wait to read on! Oh yeah thanks for posting this...I am at school about to die from boredom! Until NeXt time!! LUV YA Niki!! |
| Niki Tori 2006-10-23 ch 2, | abuseYamato is serIous! But with 28 losses and him wanting to go aganist a "pro"...Chances are he is GOING DOWN. Is that a good thing? Anyways nice start and I'll be waiting for chappie 3 okay!! UnTil NeXt TimE Love You!! Niki!! |
| Niki Tori 2006-10-23 ch 1, | abuseWOW!! Darkassasin...COOL!! The Intro was shoRT. But who am I to talk about short introductions!! ^_^ I going on to the 1st Chappie okay!! Love Ya Niki!! |
| cyberwriter06 2006-10-23 ch 1, | abuseSounds really good so far, cant wait for more! |