Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search Login Register Extras
Reviews For: how i lost you

MySweetPrince
2006-10-25
ch 1,
abuseDon't know alot about drugs... suppose you can get into a coma from coke if you o.d from it? I dunno lol..
Anywho great poem, and nice rythm to it too, I know that feeling when someone gets into drugs... they haven't died but you're just kinda waiting and predicting what's gonna happen to them... and can't do anything 'coz their too bonged out of their heads to realise they're addicted.
Anyways, I liked this piece, described a scene really well. Keep it up. X
In the Rye
2006-10-23
ch 1,
abusecoke will kill you if you od. no going back.
ebonyfire17
2006-10-23
ch 1,
abusewow, this is great
i have no idea if one can to into a coma due to cocaine...but if they can, you nailed the emotions perfectly i believe
Return to Top