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| MySweetPrince 2006-10-25 ch 1, | abuseDon't know alot about drugs... suppose you can get into a coma from coke if you o.d from it? I dunno lol.. Anywho great poem, and nice rythm to it too, I know that feeling when someone gets into drugs... they haven't died but you're just kinda waiting and predicting what's gonna happen to them... and can't do anything 'coz their too bonged out of their heads to realise they're addicted. Anyways, I liked this piece, described a scene really well. Keep it up. X |
| In the Rye 2006-10-23 ch 1, | abusecoke will kill you if you od. no going back. |
| ebonyfire17 2006-10-23 ch 1, | abusewow, this is great i have no idea if one can to into a coma due to cocaine...but if they can, you nailed the emotions perfectly i believe |