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Bunnies on Fire
2008-11-11
ch 1,
wow, that was amazing, and extremely well written. So sad, yet beautiful at the same time - loved it!
The Concept of Breathing
2008-09-29
ch 1,
well **...
i dont know if i should clap or cry, smile or frown.
i dont think i have to tell you how beautiful this was, you already know that.
so im going to go to sleep now, and i'll probably have a dream about this, i'll probably have a nightmare. i'll probably wake up smiling, i'll probably wake up crying.
Choja
2008-07-31
ch 1,
I can see why you'd cry, too. It's so sad... and very well-written.

Tragically depressing stories rule.
cormorant
2008-06-15
ch 1,
This was right up my alley, and i loved it.
What else is there to say?
Bravo.
ilovetheopera
2008-04-03
ch 1,
incredibly beautiful and very sad. strangely i have wasted all my tears on Wallflower (again) so i couldn't cry any more for this, though normally I think i would.

I like how the timeline isn't quite linear and combined with your writing style which is just kinda breathless-feeling "never ever, ever did" is surreal and amazing.
Amopet4
2008-01-18
ch 1,
The tears won't stop flowing. Excellent. More than that-- Gorgeous.
xxcylindric
2007-12-25
ch 1,
wow, this story is amazing! vice was so cool. he was all shotdead, though... =[

i read in heaven a half hour first, though, so i was kind of confused. =x
Drizzle
2007-11-12
ch 1,
I hate it when writers say that they hate something they wrote, or dislike certain parts of it. It's so refreshing to see a writer post something they are proud of.

This story is amazing.
just give me november
2007-11-09
ch 1,
i love it, too. :]
PhotographedTuesday
2007-10-04
ch 1,
Oh my, I absolutely adore it as well.
Matter of fact, I think I visibly frowned and let out a small whine when I scrolled down to see that there wasn't anymore.

Amazing how writing something can take so long and seem so endless and yet, when reading it, it seems so short and ends so soon? Sigh. Excellent job, dear.
nonaccount
2007-09-19
ch 1,
Great job creating a mood, it's almost stifling. I like the image this line evokes, "a little Gus-shaped space on the table."
The Winter Cynic
2007-07-19
ch 1,
I think I kinda cried... Question, is this the same Rhian from your Black Coffee stories?
R.J Cleverley
2007-07-15
ch 1,
This story was amazing. The descriptions and the way you captured the emotion is just heartbreaking. It truly is beautiful.
Sunshine Lust
2007-07-04
ch 1,
agh. absolutely ** vicious and beautiful and just heartstoppingly well-written. even if it wasn't for the slash... i was completely riveted from start to finish, and. Well. It was AMAZING. i love the way you can tap into and expose and [] your characters' vulnerabilities without making them seem week... and how you showcase power and sadism and drugs and minor feats of architectural achievement and descriptions that are real enough to be behind you... and while you're reading it you realize they seem that real because it's INSIDE of you.

Just. Fhking. Amazing.
Aquafied
2007-05-08
ch 1,
“As if you are completely and totally exposed, bare bones, like everyone in this goddamn city can see that you’re missing that piece of you and they know why.”
-amazing


i cant even tell you how heartbreaking this is
i know you know better than i ever will.
i see rhian as ** perfection. but i pity gus so much and his rag doll meaning.
funny image is seeing rhian with the same person as, you know what, it is gross i am not going to even make such a cliche comparison.


all the indie kids listen to architecture in helinksi
love those kids who think it
and know it
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