I actually like this concept. It's original. In stories like this maybe it would be better to have more detail, it's really a good concept. How she got there, part of the six hour ride, how Mr. Flameon looks like. That sort of thing.

I'm waiting for your update on this! :D

Cherry

Funny how a piece of fiction is sprouted from homework.

This was fairly intriguing, especially with the nuances of well-known inventions and the likes of Ford.

I do have one query, though. Whenever Jessica addresses people as ‘Sir’, isn’t it supposed to be without the capitalized ‘S’ unless you’re addressing a knight? I could be incorrect about this, though, but it did niggle at me a tad.

Just a small grammatical thing:
(Jack Silver.) = (Jack Silver).

You set the tone well, though, especially in regards to how society functioned back then (which, I suppose, was part of your homework ;P )

A particular line that made amused me:
‘My home is known as the Silver’s Estate, as I don’t wish to be known everywhere. That would certainly ruin my career.’

The Invention Stealer sounds promising, so I do hope you continue it soon.

holy freakin cow iris! ur so good. i read all of ur stuff, dont no wat i wuz or wuznt, but it makes me feel like a total immature idiot! u rock so much, i really like TIS, and all the othrs...thanx, now i no that MY writing/poems is so inferior! but anyway, good job, keep up the good work, and o yeah, that is UNBELIEVABLE!

PS: papa johns pizza
big cow...WITH HORNS
free hot dogs!
*smack**smack**smack*JESUS*smack**smack**smack*
lolz.

from ur BFF 4evr!
kath

Oh! Interesting! Since this was for a class, I assume this is (mostly) historically accurate? I would definitely like to see more of Ms. Sharpe's - or Ms. Charles' - story!