Reviews for Decisions: Effect to the cause

Reviews For: Decisions: Effect to the cause

daretobe-dIfFeRnT 2007-07-29 ch 1,	Excellent:D This was just excellent! I especially liked how you pointed out that there is a 'too much and too little'. Not many people realize that! So I'm just ecstatic that you've pointed it out! You're right, everything, EVERYTHING must be taken on a 'middle ground' lets call it. You can't overly do something or do too little of something. Exactly the same thing with food. If you eat too much of one type of food, you get sick. If you eat too little, you don't get the nutrients so once again, you get sick. Same thing with water. Did you know you could die from too much water? I'm talking like a couple of gallons. Someone drank that much and she died! Same thing if you drink too little, you get dehydrated. The middle ground is you drink 8 glasses a day:) Okay lol I'm getting a bit off topic, but you've brought up such a good point! I love it, I really do:) Well done!
Taylary Daisuke 2006-10-26 ch 1,	sort of pesimistic, don't you think? My little preaching Rosemistress, you're really good at this sort of writting. it's emotive, dark, honest, and it makes you think. I would call you sempai, after all, you're older than me, but our height difference makes me want to call you rossy-kuhai. Anyways, your best so far. PS: Heh heh, can't wait for the next one, my little "romantic-story-loving" friend. I'm telling everyone! Just kidding ^_^
kamikaze101 2006-10-24 ch 1,	Have you ever thought of writing for your school paper or submitting your articles to the newspaper? You could become a free writer for your local paper as a hobby or something. If I may suggest, I would like to read a reflective essay about why is it necessary for us humans to feel acknowledge. When my friend who is a boy asked me that question, I realized I’m always striving to be known, and I need someone to tell me if it’s healthy to want that. Beside that, I’m glad you found something you like, but remember not to leave things have way done. Meaning you should end “Opinions change and Mood swings” with a thoughtful reflective conclusion, possibly.

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