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| Kaldrenon 2006-12-10 ch 1,  | abuseI've always found the wind beautiful. The way it touches the whole world, invisible but ever-present. Your poem, to me, is a song for the wind to sing. |
| die kleine maus 2006-12-09 ch 1, | abusethis was lovely, and interesting...especially your repetition of "crying, crying" and the soft rhyme between the lines, because it gives your poem a sort of lilt, as if the wind were right there. |
| Aile Windrider 2006-12-08 ch 1, | abuseI really like this poem and thanks for the review on mine. Your on my favorites for sure. ~Aile~ |
| someday-i-will 2006-12-02 ch 1, | abuseThat's well written. I like the repitition and it flows nicely. Thanks for the review by the way x |
| Royal Bliss 2006-11-22 ch 1, | abuseVery nicely written, it's impressive. I like how you repeated these two lines. "Crying, crying" "Are the winds of time". Doing that makes the rest of it sound pretty cool. |
| SassyLil'Thunderstorm 2006-11-15 ch 1, | abuseIs it part of your style to always use some repeating lines? Its a cool idea, maybe that'd help me organize my next work a little better. Cool. |
| Teddy Geiger 2006-11-15 ch 1, | abuseWow nice job! I liked this one alot! |
| Inicora 2006-10-30 ch 1, | abuseI like the movement in this poem, and your use of repetition. Very pretty, and cold. ^^ |
| Mortifer Amor Phasmus 2006-10-29 ch 1, | abuseThis poem had some excellent imagery. I really like it. |
| Honor Bound 2006-10-28 ch 1, | abuseI like the image of wind as a warning in this piece. also how you personified it with crying, and sense of loss for the past and the future kinda. very good, peace |
| Twilit Exaggerance 2006-10-27 ch 1, | abuse*thumbs up* An eery poem, chilling, very much like the wind you speak of. Could have carried on a little bit, to perhaps have a particular message, perhaps, but otherwise, an incredibly good piece! |
| classic violet 2006-10-24 ch 1, | abusefreaking gorgeous! omg, simple and so enchanting. wonderful work. keep writing! |
| Guardrail 2006-10-23 ch 1, | abuseNice, I like this a lot. Very thoughtfully written. Keep writing. |
| Midnight Star Lights 2006-10-23 ch 1, | abuseI hope that you like this one because I found this one, and it is old. It isn't as well written as I would have liked, but I like it just the same. I hope that you like it. Thanks so much for reading. Bless you all! |