I've always found the wind beautiful. The way it touches the whole world, invisible but ever-present.

Your poem, to me, is a song for the wind to sing.

this was lovely, and interesting...especially your repetition of "crying, crying" and the soft rhyme between the lines, because it gives your poem a sort of lilt, as if the wind were right there.

I really like this poem and thanks for the review on mine. Your on my favorites for sure.

~Aile~

That's well written. I like the repitition and it flows nicely. Thanks for the review by the way x

Very nicely written, it's impressive. I like how you repeated these two lines. "Crying, crying" "Are the winds of time". Doing that makes the rest of it sound pretty cool.

Is it part of your style to always use some repeating lines? Its a cool idea, maybe that'd help me organize my next work a little better. Cool.

Wow nice job! I liked this one alot!

I like the movement in this poem, and your use of repetition.

Very pretty, and cold. ^^

This poem had some excellent imagery. I really like it.

I like the image of wind as a warning in this piece. also how you personified it with crying, and sense of loss for the past and the future kinda. very good, peace

*thumbs up*

An eery poem, chilling, very much like the wind you speak of.

Could have carried on a little bit, to perhaps have a particular message, perhaps, but otherwise, an incredibly good piece!

freaking gorgeous!

omg, simple and so enchanting. wonderful work. keep writing!

Nice, I like this a lot. Very thoughtfully written. Keep writing.

I hope that you like this one because I found this one, and it is old. It isn't as well written as I would have liked, but I like it just the same. I hope that you like it. Thanks so much for reading.


Bless you all!