That poem was so sad. I really hope that you feel better.

Aww. I think thats the worst way to lose a friend, when nothing will happen, it just ends... :(

Wow, thats sad, sounds exactly like it was based off real life events, because this was written so much like it was really happening.

Keep writing!

Lurid

I like this poem a lot.

I've had something similair to this happen to me, exept the girl and I were so close, even in looks. We would even say the same thing at exactly the same time when ever we talked (even to other people) And people would swear that we were twins... *sigh*

So, I get what you're talking about.

((So, you mainly write freeverse? I do half and half, half freeverse and half rhyming)) .

It's very personal and alot of people will understand it and relate to it.

That was really good! It's too bad when you lose a close friend like that though \

-SweetXBliss