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| FutureActress 2006-10-23 ch 1,   | I loved it, as tony the tiger would say it was gr-ate : ) My only suggestion would be to fix up the gammer for example "so ill dance you" I think you ment so I'll dance for you But I love how you tied in emotion and it was very good! Keep writting! |