It's funni colours!

I used to be really girly, and love pinks and purples. Then I loved blue, and now I love black.

I like the but saying how can a colour be girly or make you manly. I dont think a colour defines you.

Although, I like wearing black because it's dark and seems sad...lol

yeah, colours are quite powerful

I always feel like this! Colors do affect you, but still, why is it so wrong for a guy to wear pink? lol, but good poem :)

Hello! This poem looks like a really good draft of poem. It has some nice words and covers great ideas, but it seems almost unfinished. Also, there's an eensy-weensy typo in the last line, if you don't mind me saying so. If you do mind me saying so, just ignore what I said. :) I know part of the way this poem is, is because of your writing style (important!) but I think you could make it even better!