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| HauntedMisery 2007-10-23 ch 1, | Oh I like this...it made me smile =] Great job. |
| KASoroka 2007-03-12 ch 1, | Heh this was kinda kool read. However You have one typo, " looke" in the past paragraph. I'm guessing it was supposed to be, looked. |
| Wings As Eagles 2006-10-24 ch 1, | Um, wow. This is certainly short, sweet and to the point! It captured my interest very quickly too. Good job! |
| J.E.Wyatt 2006-10-23 ch 1, | Hm... interesting. I'm guessing you've set this thing in the Regency era? The writing structure isn't 'quite' regency-esque, but it's quite entertaining! I hope this isn't the end? It'd be nice to read some more... |