That was mildly disturbing, but this is still an interesting story.

That was absolutely lovely. Very imaginative and haunting.

An interesting story, tough I am curious about a few things. Why are they in this cell? Why are these wings being attached? Was it the Angel's choice, or the Maker's? Are those wings Functional? Otherwise, an interesting story. Though it was rather disturbing.

Beautifully shocking! Very nice descriptions. It is a self-contained little story and that's not easy to do. It is short but all of the information is there. I love it! One thought though on the last line. I'm not sure I follow why the angel would be thinking about Lucifer losing his wings. Lucifer is mentioned earlier to that's good. And I like the thought but I'm not sure it quite fits as it is written. But I could just be missing it.

**, that made me feel woozy. That really is sick lol. Great job, you're really detailed in your descriptions

Ooh. Very precise and haunting. It would make an interesting story if you decided to continue this... but it stands well on its own. The details of mirrors, and tubing, and the filthiness of the place in contrast to the wings as well as the last couple of paragraphs are very powerful. This one made me shiver - very, very creative take on traditional 'God'. Thank you. :)

You're like so amazing, I don't know what to say ...
Usually, I have a plot-fixation, so if I like what happens in a story, I am happy and like the story (if it's well writen, thats a bonus of course.)
But this makes me happy with just the writing, you know? The way you arrange words into something beautiful and it doesn't matter as much what it actually says.
Not that I want to say your plot sucks or anything, it's just in this case the language is not just the way to transport the plot, but stands for itself, like music maybe ...
I can't really explain it, I hope you get my drift.

This is so well-written... I'm speechless. Dang :D

Wow that was really good! It was kinda morbid but it was morbid in a good way... that sounds a little funny... But none the less I loved it!

I really liked the tone that this story was written in. The descriptions too, descriptions are always a plus. I wonder though, is the Angel-Maker God? Is he Lucifer? Or is he some genius with one of those twisted ambitions.

I love your stories though, and look forward to seeing more.

Wow, this is interesting! There was a lot of nice detail! It was all so very beautiful in its description. The feathers with the fair skin! Oh, please keep it up!